this is so fucking funny, please make more
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this is so fucking funny, please make more
Even if Vivziepop deserved all the backlash for what she did all those years ago, I'd still argue that you can separate the content creator from the content. I agree, this was by no means a bad pilot, but there were a few too many sound effects. As for the characters and plot itself, I agree with you. Touching moments like the phone call and Angel Dust almost comforting Charlie opened up the series to include character development, instead of keeping most of the demons as assholes. Sure, it can be expected that a TV show with an established narrative shuld include some form of character development, but it's a nice touch to give viewers that hope of redemption anyways, especially after no one but Vaggie taking Charlie's dream seriously. The character designs themselves, whether people like them or not, are still interesting and stand out from one another. Also, in my opinion, I thought the animation was smooth throughout, but I'm not one for spotting animation mistakes. All in all, yeah, Hazbin Hotel looks really promising.
Also also, I gotta say, this was well edited and funny, props to you
First off, I really like the overall art style, character designs, and character voices. I think you have a lot of potential based on what I'm seeing here. My only criticisms are that the "Oh hello" part of Sunny's line seem a bit out of place. I feel that because no one else gave much of a greeting, only giving Sunny a greeting seems off, though that might just be because Sunny's a friendly and outgoing character. If so, I think the greeting fits well. I also really love Pendleton. The only thing I would change is the voice. I like the voice actor, but the quality seems sort of robotic. I realize you responded to a previous comment saying you were trying to figure the audio out. I don't mean to be rude by repeating it, its just something I noticed.
Thanks for the feedback! Along with my still developing audio skills I'm also doing all of the voices myself and having to stretch my limited acting abilities. When I started the series I thought I was going to stick with the original 5 characters so I didn't expect to have to come up with more distinct voices. Should have thought ahead better on that.
I really like the gameplay of this. It didn't hook me at first, but once I got to that first level where you need to see it turn so you can see the new perspective I was more interested. Also, the music is nice to listen to, but I wish it didn't slow down every time I placed something down. Other than that, I really like your game :)
Thanks :)
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