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[One Reality Over - [re-introductions]]

First off, I really like the overall art style, character designs, and character voices. I think you have a lot of potential based on what I'm seeing here. My only criticisms are that the "Oh hello" part of Sunny's line seem a bit out of place. I feel that because no one else gave much of a greeting, only giving Sunny a greeting seems off, though that might just be because Sunny's a friendly and outgoing character. If so, I think the greeting fits well. I also really love Pendleton. The only thing I would change is the voice. I like the voice actor, but the quality seems sort of robotic. I realize you responded to a previous comment saying you were trying to figure the audio out. I don't mean to be rude by repeating it, its just something I noticed.

albmoore responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Along with my still developing audio skills I'm also doing all of the voices myself and having to stretch my limited acting abilities. When I started the series I thought I was going to stick with the original 5 characters so I didn't expect to have to come up with more distinct voices. Should have thought ahead better on that.